Feedback analysis

This is the opening we created:

And this is the feedback we received over multiple media platforms, such as: Facebook and Youtube:

 

Now that we've had our feedback we would go back to our work and edit the music more and make the music suit our opening better. This is what i would change: I would make the beginning music quieter and make it so that the music would slowly build up as the opening goes on. I would make the music less imposing by making the volume lower. I would do this because with the music so loud it distracts you from whats happening in the opening rather then contributing to the opening. I would also make the music fade to silence at key points in the opening so that it build more suspense.